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Tuesday, April 6, 2010

The Island of Belgada by: Brian Nunez


The Island of Belgada

In the middle of the Bermuda triangle lays a small but unique and beautiful island called Belgada. This island was anything but normal, in this island magic existed Anything you can think of this island had, whether its trolls, witches , fairy’s you name it they have it. But this island had normal people as well, they all knew about the magical creatures and most of them got along very well. Three hundred years ago the King and Queen of Belgada bay gave birth to a beautiful baby girl named Isabella . Growing up Isabella was always polite and generous, she didn’t care if you were rich or poor , or magical or not she would treat everybody the same.

One day while walking to the market Isabella bumped into a man rushing to get home, his name was Stefano. They both quickly apologize to each other and as they lay eyes on each other they cant get them off. Isabella struggles for words and so does Stefano. As Stefano hands Isabella her items that she dropped he says “ You have gorgeous eyes” Isabella quickly turns as red as a tomato and thanks him but hesitates and says she has to leave. Every Sunday they would see each other in the market and just talk about a lot of different things, it was quite noticeable they were quickly falling in love.Isabella invited Stefano to a dinner her family was holding, this would be the first time he meets her parents. He was very apprehensive, but told him self that everything will be ok. During dinner, Isabella’s dad asks Stefano some questions, but he felt like as if he was being interrogated .

There was an awkward moment of silence towards the end of dinner, right when it was so silent you could hear the crickets, there was a huge explosion. The King’s house elf runs to them and tells them, “sir the wicked witch has attacked our village!” The king orders the house elf to unlock the hollow, which is a powerful source of white magic, some say the strongest magic there has ever been. As he unlocks the box that holds the hollow, the hollow posses the most power force of good it can detect. That force of good happened to be Stefano.

In shock and not knowing what to do Stefano hesitates and runs away, but as he’s running he hears the holler of Isabella and the king. He runs back but by the time he gets there the wicked witch had kid napped them. The queen in tears begs Stefano to go save them, “please your our only hope, the hollow chose you for a reason, and this is that reason”. Stefano suddenly knew more than what he thought he did. He knew that the witch took the king and Isabella to her layer in the most darkest forest in Belgada but he had no Idea how to control his magic. The house elf reminds him “You are the most powerful magical being alive, all you have to do is concentrate on something you want and let yourself have it !” . Stefano focuses on getting to Isabella. Within a blink of an eye he finds himself outside the witches home, he notices that the surroundings of the house is not normal the trees look like they haven't seen sunlight for century's.

Rare animals would run by his foot startling him. He was in an uncomfortable position which he could not handle so he decides to walk around. As he walks around he notices that she has her home guarded by trolls and ogres about 10 of each.Stefano knew he had to defeat them, but was hesitating to start fighting, he seen Isabella tied to a rope and hanging from it, her mouth was sealed with a spell the witch cast. This made him furious and so he attacked. He waved his hand up in the air and that triggered his telekinetic ability, as he is tackling a ogre another ogre comes from behind and try’s to attack him , but he turns around and flinched with his hands in his face. This caused the other ogre to freeze. He does it again with more anger and that caused the ogre to explode ! He finishes off all of the ogres and trolls. He barges into the witches home and demands Isabella and the king back she refuses and says “you will die as well”, Stefano reply’s “I don’t think so” and waves his hand to throw her against the wall. She looks up and him says “ DAMIT!, THE HOLLOW!! I will still take you on”. The king Yells “Stefano you have the gift of making up your own spells and curses ! Use it that’s the only way she can be vanquished !”. Stefano stalls with his telekinetic power to try to come up with a spell. He starts chanting “ This evil witch that is near, vanish now I have no fear”. The witch slowly starts to bubble and shake really fast as she yells “ It’s not over yet ! Muahahahahah!” the witch explodes into dust as the wind blows it away.

Stefano unties the king and Isabella and teleports back to the palace with them. The king and the queen cannot thank him enough, they offered him to keep the hollow, “you are a true hero son” says the queen. After accepting to keep the hollow, he turns to Isabella and says "i know i have only known you for about a month now but it feels like ive known you my whole life." tearing up, he says "will you marry me?" She replies "YES!" with excitement. As the people of belgada applaud and cheer they kiss and they lived happily ever after.



REVIEW
this story of a prince and princess is more of a rescue mission. It has a charming tale close to some others, but in a new light it shows great potential. The island of belgada is definitly a new terrain that the prince/ warrior that save his princess.

An interview with the author Brian

Brian says that his story is the basic fairy tale story but with a twist of a little action wear the princess was rich and guy she meets is poor and humble which his ideas come from his favorite type of TVs shows which is superstitions and sci-fi which he had a lot of fun and what’s more interesting is that the story takes place in the late 1600’s old fashion

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