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Tuesday, April 6, 2010

THE UNIVERSAL THEORY by Marcus A. Cardwell


Have you ever wondered how the universe came to be and the destructive powers that the universe has. So many things have occurred in the universe that we are not even aware of, but there are some beings as we call them that have these special powers such as Omni awareness the ability to consciously know what happens in the universe. These beings are protectors born from energy of the big bang and since energy can never die neither will them. These creatures are given an assignment every time there is great distress for a planet or something that could proof to be of important use, "to fix" the problems as they call it, but in a human's mind it would be called annihilation, but this story is about a certain being, no one knew its name or how to stop it until this year.This being's name is Athe and he was the most powerful of the entire guild that he was a part of. Though he was the one with the worst reputation from the guild. Even Athe was so powerful in fact that for him to materialize cost millions of peoples life force, In the future millions of people would never get the chance to live and the only shape Athe knows is the a very powerful bird prey the phoenix but manifests himself through a smoke cover, but his most popular means of appearance is through possession and that is where our story begins.In Harlem at the mathematics-science library a young group of kids who were studying for their metaphysics test. One of the friends Maja had jumped out her seat with a disturbing look on her.being Maja's friend Dre, Keira, Steve they dismissed her jump as a case of nerves for the test they had the next day just as she did. Sadly it was really Athe taking control over her body.Then as she walked over to the water fountain she started to shake uncontrollably she fell. The library started to shake and books flew off the shelves, but realizing that the only thing her friends could have done was run outside directing the other people to the exits and call 911 they did just that,but Maja was getting worst her eyes turned black,and Maja's eyes cried blood, and she started to scream in agony her skin started to rip and tare. her arms were cutting ripping her shirt and jeans blood rolled down her legs and arms. During that loud cries of help chilled not only Maja's bones but her friends bones also. While starring at the door a voice yelled out of Maja's mouth" the end is coming along with me you can't stop me.I will solve the problem you created you insensitive destructive humans." Strangely as the ambulancecame everything turned back almost as if someone pressed a rewind button on a movie. Then Maja woke up with no recollection of what happened to her and the library when they visited her in the hospital.The fear in Maja's eyes grew to the point were she almost had a panic attack. then just as Dre,Keira, and Steve left the same voice came out of Maja's mouth again and she said "even if I wanted to help there is nothing I can do this races fate has been decided." It was different then before Maja was able to control him and commanded Athe to say his name. Then she screamed "Athe". Next she commanded him to say what his mission was and she shouted again he said "my mission was to destroy the earthe and that though he wanted to save the human race but he couldn't do that." Strangely Athe didn't understand that being the second most powerful member of his guild he would be able to do the possessing thing no problem aslo since its his specialty. He never ran into this problem before. In that moment Athe thought to himself this being must be stronger than others the guild has run across. Then finally Athe shouted from Maja's mouth again "my mission is to annihilate the human race they have taken advantage of this precious gift that they live on."Maja's friend’s Dre, Steve, and Keira went to the library to find out anything about Athe. When they came out talking about Athe a homeless man told them he knew about maja and Athe, also that his name was Luceme. He told them to follow him but with the the low credibility he had as a homeless man they decided Dre will follow and Steve and Keira went to the space museum. Dre got trapped following Luceme, there was a bright black and dark purple light swirling around him. Then Dre screamed out" I’am the all powerful general luceme and the human race will fall at my hand." Then keira got a call that Maja was moved to a psychiatric hospital after another epileptic attack. The nurse that called her told her that Maja was talking about a general coming to finish what she started. Really was of the essence when Dre ,possessed, flew into the sky and turned the sun red. Keira and Steve ran to the psychiatric hospital as Maja was admitted to a room and when they got to her she was in a trance, her eyes where white, she was babbling incoherently. Saying things like "regnad ni si dlrow eht eht espylacopa si gnimoc gnola htiw lareneg emecul".So they recorded it but neither of them could understand what she was saying. Their professor was the also the linguistic professor at their university so they brought him the recorder, he researched it. The tape was the simplest thing in the world to their professor,he told them she was speaking backwards so they reversed the tape and heard her say" the world is in danger the apocalypse is coming along with general Luceme." So they went back to the hospital to ask Maja what they needed to do to stop this future tragedy. Still in the trance Maja told them ,speaking in a doubled male and female voices, "you must find the orb of draconic energy and the phoenix's wings combine them in front of her and I will do the rest". Her eyes glowed and blasts of energy flew from her eyes into Keira and Steve’s eyes. A map was shown in there head and showed them the first. The location of the orb of draconic energies.A bright bluish white light exploded out of the room. Then Keira and Steve woke up in a tent in nineteen ninety four. They were given glasses even though others weren't as they asked the lady who gave them the glasses why she did and the woman murmured angrily " stupid humans your race is so primitive and disgusting. " They replied "what". The woman yelled back in a deep voice "put them on" and the glasses flew on their faces and the tent was suddenly filled with all different types of beings. All of a sudden a couple had jumped of the stands and ran towards Keira and Steve. Keira took a pole from the wall next to them that was used in the show and swatted the woman across the face. Then Steve took another pole and as he beat the male the others swarmed around him. He told Keira to sneak away and get the orb. So she snuck away and found the orb near the seal. She walked closer to the seal and stabbed it in the eye. Then as soon as Keira grabbed the orb an explosion burst Steve open and the aliens blew up. A white light appeared and Maja hovered out of it. Then Steve rematerialized. Maja told them now that Steve had proved himself with a sacrifice he has gained the power to materialize. Maja told Keira to hold on to Steve and as she did they blew up and materialized on a beach. Ten women ambushed them as soon as they arrived and sent Keira to a camp and Steve to the queen. Keira was walking around the camp and a woman pulled her aside she saw scars on her face with blood flowing down her leg. She asked Keira to find her daughter and set her free, her daughter was made the high priestess on the day she was born and she has been the phoenix's wings. Keira agreed to help her as long as she got to keep the wings, the woman agreed. Then Keira started to look for the girl but instead found steve and the queen. Then Keira saw the queen was Maja spiting out eggs on the couch that Steve was chained to.Keira was watching from a corner when Maja started told Steve." I'm sorry but if I don't lay these eggs the first step will be for not." while Maja walked back to her thrown Keira moved to the couch and unbuckled Steve's hands and told him to act like nothing happened. She backed away as Maja moved closer. Maja started to caress Steve's face telling him that he needs to bleed over the eggs as the next step. Then she took his wrist as he tried to escape and struggle and cut him. Blood splattered on the eggs and The eggs sprung into the air and started to glow with a bright blue light. Keira first staring at the eggs glance to her side and saw the little girl as she walked in the room with the wing's. Keira jumped on the girl, took the wings grabbedSteve and they materialized in the hospital roomwith the girl ,and as they took the things out the girl ran away while general Luceme "possessing Dre" crashed into the room and through Maja out the window. As Luceme and Maja "still possessed by Athe" flew in the air fighting and throwing blasts, the eggs appeared,Maja told Steve and Keira to cut the eggs open and poor the liquid on the orb. As they did the the orb glowed bright.Keira and Steve put the wings under it and the materials turn into an owl made of a mixture between gold and metal. Maja caught the bird flew into the sun, and as general Luceme followed through the core of the sun she smacked his head off with the owl. Then Maja took the bird and smashed it on Luceme' body in place of his head. As the bird screached Luceme's body turned to solid gold and was in cased in a crystal as Maja came back the sun changed its color and she fainted.Athe flew away telling them that he was greatful for what the human race had shown him. That though we have flaws we possess the greatest strength of all hopeand determination and that though he will be free from the guild's control he will always protect them and the earth. Then strangely the same thing that happend to the library before hapend again and they all woke up in the library the same day they had their big test but something wasn't right happened Dre wasn't there and Maja had no memory of it, but Keira and Steve would always remember and call for the help of Athe if the earth was ever again in perrel which with the global worries something tells me will be soon.
THE END
REVIEW
This very interesting story has some off pieces when it comes to mythological theories it definitly focuses on a science fiction point view, but the elements of myths are in there such as a call to adventure and the belly of the whale. These six characters have a tough time trying defend the human race and save it aswell.

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